A great big thanks to the kind folks at Long and Short Reviews! They have up my first official Book Blog review today.
I have to agree with their review 100%. "Mythical: Heart of Stone" is slow at the beginning. Painfully slow. But that's because it started as a screenplay and I was going for the slow, mysterious build up to action. That's been corrected in the sequel.
Thank you again, Orchid for your time and review!